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Teen Poetry #4

i took your heart

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

0 posted 2001-01-25 09:25 PM

this is written for christopher. i just broke up with him cause i realised i didn't feel the same way.

I took your heart and riped it in two.
I didn't mean to hurt you. I promise i didn't think things would turn out that way.

You told me you loved me. I knew i didn't love you. YOu said we were ment to be. It's fate you said. I knew you were wrong.

That day on the beach was nice. The afternoon in the mall wasn't. I knew then that i didn't love you. You want someone who cares about you. It's not me.

We were from two different worlds. We're at two different places in our life. I'm sorry i didn't mean to take your heart.

DreamerGrl27
Member

since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

1 posted 2001-01-25 09:41 PM

I really liked this...I'm sorry about the situation. I know how hard these kind of situations are. I understand your side and I think it's good that you told him how you truely feel so he knows. I hope everything works out okay.

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

2 posted 2001-01-25 09:44 PM

hey sorry about this situation..i was once on the oppisite side of your p.o.v but everything worked out in the end..somehow..great post< !signature-->

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

[This message has been edited by anomaly187 (edited 01-25-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-26 01:16 PM

apologizing is the first step
seems you do mean what you say based on your poem
no playing games with people's feelings, ok?

great post
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-26 05:26 PM

No comment or advice.

but nice on expressing yourself.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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