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~sugarpie313~
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0 posted 2001-01-25 07:51 PM


QB sacks, hitting and violence galore
This is what I definitely live for.
Football is the American past time
Screw that baseball; give me a defensive line!

Watching the play, it's a shovel toss
And running the ball will be Randy Moss!
You're rambling on about that new show "The Mole"
Shut up will you, its fourth and goal!

The pressure is on the field goal kicker,
Boy he had better not been drinking any liquor!
Because if he misses this easy shot,
I will make it so in hell he will rot.

So now you know my passion for this sport,
In which my temper is very short.
My favorite day is game day,
So just leave my TV and me alone and be on your way!



*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

© Copyright 2001 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
anomaly187
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1 posted 2001-01-25 09:41 PM


lol great post sugarpie..coming from someone who doesn't enjoy sports your poem will flood into my memory everytime i happen to get a glimpse of a football game and make me laugh...great work< !signature-->

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"



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Acies
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2 posted 2001-01-26 01:09 PM


Nice to see some gals loving sports
he he he  
wait a minute, isn't a shovel toss usually for running backs?
As far as I know, Randy Moss sin't one
yeah yeah yeah....poem's gotta rhyme
and there's a possibility he's on motion when it snaps and it is tossed to him
SUPERBOWL is coming up soon  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-26 05:25 PM


Will you marry me?



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
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4 posted 2001-01-26 05:54 PM


LOL thanks everyone.
anomaly187- i'm glad you will think of this everytime u catcha  glimpse of football  

acire- yes it did have to rhyme, and Randy Moss has played running back before. it's just not one of his big positions  

Dopey- yes. LOL   hehehehe
(but can i keep Frank??  LOL)

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

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