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Lamour |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I’m speechless tonight The rains dripping from the windowpane I can feel your light I can see the beautiful color of your name Feel the burning fire At the silent sound of the ocean waves Can’t control my desire Cause I can not stop seeing your face This is Lamour This is Lamour, Lets dance in the moonlight together. This is Lamour This is Lamour, Lets just stay in this place forever. This is Lamour. Baby you are so close Even though you are so many seas away I can feel your soul Every second of every single day This is Lamour This is Lamour, Lets dance in the moonlight together. This is Lamour This is Lamour, Lets just stay in this place forever. This is Lamour. I swear there’s nothing better then to be with you Nothing really matters when I’m with you The memories are still shining cause of your love And of you and everything you do I can’t have enough This is Lamour This is Lamour, There’s nothing better in this world. This is Lamour This is Lamour, There’s nothing better in a girl. This is Lamour. This is Lamour This is Lamour, Lets dance in the moonlight together. This is Lamour This is Lamour, Lets just stay in this place forever. This is Lamour. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is wonderful! Have you ever thought of actually putting this to some music? If you have or do, I want an MP3, alright?  I really like this. Well done. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
If yer tryin to be french....I think it's L'amour. Anyway well done on this one. i liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hahah..wheres my mp3????  ...j/k...this was sweet...you portrayed very strong emotions very well throughout....i liked this song (?) very much...great work!!!
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
niceee...i liked it the repition it worked well ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really wonderful ~SEA |
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