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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-27 04:18 PM



All I have and all I do
Cannot compare to the love of you
You make me feel alive
You are my highest high
All I can do is smile
When I look into your eyes

You're my star, even when you are far
You're not alone, because your heart
is my home

You are my biggest prize
So beautiful and wise
All I want to do, when I see you
Is to see you smile

When I look into your eyes

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30
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In a dream world
1 posted 2001-05-27 04:23 PM


this is really wonderful, and it's full of heart. you've done a wonderful job on this, and I hope to read more in the really near future!  
*s*
Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Sparkie4PLUR
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since 2001-05-03
Posts 8

2 posted 2001-05-27 05:43 PM


Wow this is a great poem, full of love   Makes me think of my b/f   Keep up the good work.

PLUR
Sparkie
"The music will never stop, the heartbeat will never fade, the party will NEVER end"

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-05-27 06:47 PM


sweet poem...nicely expressed...great job and i enjoyed it quite a bit...keep writing ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-05-28 12:49 PM


Very sweet poem. Awwwwww very nice. I liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
5 posted 2001-05-28 03:04 AM


Aw this is so sweet. Nicely done.  

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

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