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Heaven New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 8 |
I go to school each day With the people that i hate And listen to their pointless views on life I hear all the lies and rumors They tell about each other I know all their pain and strife So tell me why i listen To all the useless whining It's not like i really care They dont' know i'm here they ignored me all year Why do i put up with their crap What is the point What is the point What is the point to my life What is the point What is the point What is the point to my life I go to work sometimes And listen to people whine About how bad their day has been They whine and moan While on the phone Make me suffer from five to ten After work i have a smoke Get dirty looks from pretty folk Who think they gotta be better than me Don't wanna go home Dont' wanna be alone Wanna have go have fun and be free What is the point What is the point What is the point to my life What is the point What is the point What is the point to my life I hate my family They don't care about me They never let me do what i want My siblings hate me My parents want to kill me You can all just...JUST...GO TO HADES!!!! I'm really pissed off now At life in general It never seems to go my way There's nothing i can go But sit here and complain to you so i guess that is all i have to say |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on the poem and thank you for cooperating. I hope to see you posting more   I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job heather...this was written nicely according to the subject of which you were writing on...i liked it...and some parts i did relate...and i do know that angry...cuz i live with it everyday!...anyways...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Heather: I really do like this poem, becoz i can relate to it. I used to feel that my parents dont care about me too, but in reality they really do. They may not show but they do really care for you. So pleaze dont think they dont becoz all it will do is cause you more pain. kepp smiling hun Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Questions about our life are hard to answer. The best thing to do is forget it and spend the that time to do something productive. Great write. keep it up I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great job hun and honestly, 90% of the time i feel the same way you do...i dont know what the point of any of this is...but i guess that what keeps me goin...or atleast i think...waitig to find the answer to my long lived question...if you find it out b4 me..please let me know |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
like the poem and how you show your feelings so...clearly. keep writing, it helps get out anger, and it's a wonderful tool. besides that, you are good at it!! I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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