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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-05-11 01:27 PM


a million words...running through my head
but i cant seem to pick up on any of them
words on paper...thats all it is
but i cant even manage to think of them
they're in my head...all jumbled up
but not one of them has a meaning to me
its selective amnesia...directed at words
but hey! i just wrote an odd lil poem


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-11 03:03 PM


Hey great poem I hope it helps to get rid of the writers block... i'm stuck in the same place myself  
Zu

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2 posted 2001-05-11 06:33 PM


I like it Tiffers!  Selective Amnesia..... GREAT term there.      I'm going to use that one.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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3 posted 2001-05-11 06:57 PM


This poem was good!  It's hard to get through blocks, isn't it?!?  Well, everyone disagreed with me in Teen Chat, as usual, but I hope if it's not gone now that it will be soon.  Good luck

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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4 posted 2001-05-11 07:19 PM


Well, I guess you got over your writers block!!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

MoeRocko
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5 posted 2001-05-11 07:39 PM


haha

Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually...

Why do people remind me of vacuums?

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6 posted 2001-05-16 04:01 AM


funny how you manage to write when you supposedly say you can't due to the blockage....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-05-21 09:31 PM


must be nice to have your type of writer's block  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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8 posted 2001-05-21 09:38 PM


hehe...i enjoyed this poem tiff ...lol?...hehe... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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