The Million Pieces of Who I Am (The last of the series and my 1000th post!)

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Teen Poetry #4

The Million Pieces of Who I Am (The last of the series and my 1000th post!)

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-19 08:35 PM

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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-19 08:41 PM

wowwww!!!
just pure beauty u have just shown me
thru this poem..i'll really liked it.
and really congrats on the 1000th post i really enjoy reading ur poems and replys till the next 1000th post. ur in the big league NOW! marie

also i feel bad that this awesome series has already come to a end

..
though thanks..
for sharing such a great piece marie!
keep writing

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[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-19-2001).]

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

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swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-04-20 12:26 PM

wow....
that was trully amazing!!

i loved...i cant decide which part i loved more!!..it was just GREAT!!

CONGRATUALTIONS on the 1000th post!!..woo hoo!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-20 02:45 AM

The series rocked Marie. Very well done! And welcome to the thousand club!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

4 posted 2001-04-20 10:55 AM

Wow

Ok, breath...

Ok, I can do this. Your poem was beautiful. The whole series was. And congrats on the 1000th post!!

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

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viginia

5 posted 2001-04-20 01:09 PM

this is the most amazing series i have ever read. the beauty that you weave with your words leaves me speachless and dumbfounded as i try to fully appreciate how incredible your poetry is. congratulations on your 1000th post, i will be eagerly waiting for the next 1000. you amaze me love, don't ever stop writing beautiful poetry.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-20 03:58 PM

OMG!!! That was simply......

PERFECT

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

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Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2001-04-20 04:31 PM

You amaze me. Your words just amaze me. *is speechlessly amazed*..........

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-04-20 08:11 PM

*is absolutely amazed*

"I blinked and was born, blinked again and died."

This line made me almost fall out of my chair... very incredible. Your series was outstanding.
I wish I knew how to end a series.

You all know what I'm talking about... hehe
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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