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lilpoet
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0 posted 2001-04-17 10:16 PM



Wether to hurt you or not
Is somthing that takes a lot of thought
You see, there's this other guy
This is so hard, I don't want to make you cry
I don't love him, I love you
This is just somthing I have to do
I love you so much
But what's not there is your touch
I need to have you, have you here
I'm tired of having a relationship
With the phone to my ear
This hurt you're feeling won't last forever
In a matter of time, we'll be together
Oh look, now I'm crying too
It's hurts me as much as it hurts you
Everything is just so confusing
And I feel like I'm the one loosing
You're great everything I've hoped for
But where's your touch? I need more
Lets both cry and wonder why
Just know tha this isn't goodbye...

*I wrote this for my bf that I have now...we broke up for a short amount of time, but now we're back together...it'll be a yr. june 14th.  I don't know why I ever thought about giving up.*

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

© Copyright 2001 Nicole Chandler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-17 10:40 PM


hey! you've been gone for awhile..glad you're back! Great job here...i guess sometimes we just get so frustrated with things and we want to give up. Its good that you can look back and be happy you didnt. keep posting!

*dq

-=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=-

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2 posted 2001-04-17 11:17 PM


This is a very sweet poem!  I'm happy for you and your boyfriend.
Thanks for the read.  Nicely done  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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3 posted 2001-04-18 12:04 PM


I liked this. I'm glad to see that you're back together!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-04-18 12:11 PM


heyyyy girl where have you been?? I missed ya around here   Sometimes we never really know what we have until its gone so maybe you needed that little amount of time apart to truly realize how lucky you are!!!
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