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IsGona
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0 posted 2001-04-14 03:56 PM


ok peeps... here’s the deal
I've been saying I'm going to be a round more, and I have a little but haven't really been able to read a whole lot of poems, but in about a week and a half my life is going to become a lot simpler and I shall have the luxury time to spend here.  
Anyhow it's good to reunite whit all the friends I made earlier but there are so many new faces that I don't really know so I'm bringing back an old challenge.  
It's called I am.  Someone started it in the Poetry Challenge forum, and it spread through out the others.  Anyhow the challenge is to write a poem in the following format:

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I am (two special characteristics you have)
I wonder (something you are actually curious about)
I hear (an imaginary sound)
I see (an imaginary sight)
I want (an actual desire)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I pretend (something you actually pretend to do)
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch (an imaginary touch)
I worry (something that really bothers you)
I cry (something that makes you very sad)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I understand (something you know is true)
I say (something you believe in)
I dream (something you actually dream about)
I try (something you really make an effort about)
I hope (something you actually hope for)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)
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Well if you got writers block some times this is a good way to get out of it too, but if you don't like this format or are just struggling with it don't waste your time trying to conform,  simply write a poem titled 'I am'... any how here was the one I wrote back in the day when I had the time and creative energy to write poems:


~ I am ~

I am a dreamer, I am a realist too
I wonder if my dreams, will ever come true
I hear my dreams, silenced by my mind
I see my future clearly,  also undefined
I want to choose, one of two
I am a dreamer, I am a realist too

I pretend that I am destined
I feel I should be questioned
I touch the edge of my desires, but they're always out of grasp
I worry only I, will hear my dying gasp
I cry alone, without a clue
I am a dreamer, I am a realist too

I understand, that I'm duplex
I say that life, is too complex
I dream my dreams, all come true
I try to conquer, and subdue
I  hope that I, will come through
I am a dreamer, I am a realist too


[This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 04-14-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-04-14 04:10 PM


  Yepperoonies, loved this the first time and loved it the second. I'll post my response to the challenge.........later. Peace out bubba!
  ~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

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2 posted 2001-04-14 04:28 PM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh mannn its a re-post!
but yea.. i really like this one though never saw the first but.. hehe

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3 posted 2001-04-14 08:53 PM


Nice.  Let's get some of the newbies in on this one.  
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4 posted 2001-04-15 01:26 AM


I remember this!
I DO I DO!!!!
I never take part in the challenges....but I'd sure love to see all you other members do it.....c'mon now!
don't be shy!
I won't make fun of you too bad!  

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5 posted 2001-04-15 08:13 AM


This sounds like a pretty cool challenge.. I'll start working on it  
Great idea

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

IsGona
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6 posted 2001-04-15 10:10 AM


I was hoping to get more unfamiliar faces in here, but I'm very interested in hearing the takers I already have
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