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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-01-18 06:58 PM

NOTE: This poem is designed so that you can start anywhere and it'd still make sense and have a proper ryhme. It's wise to start on on the line every 4 verses.....as long as you keep that you're ok. You can do from left to right.....up to down....anything, just make sure to keep 4 verses. If you go left to right every 8th verse should ryhme....anyway figure it out. Even I don't get it, im lazy right now. But enjoy. Oh and the +'s symbolize a DOWNWARD arrow.

The Anywhere Void:

Heart Broken <.......> Loosing Love
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
Emotions Shattered  <.......>
A Waterloo
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
A Life Token <.......> Dying Dove
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
Nothing Mattered <.......>
The Shackled You
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
Hating Way <.......> Time Not Used
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
Finger Frost <.......> Dead Blood Cell
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
Die Today <.......> Life Not Mused
     ^                              ^
     .                              .
     .                              .
     +                              +
Loving Lost <.......> A Fiery Hell

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I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

[This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 01-18-2001).]

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-18 07:02 PM

.
now there
.
is a very
.
original
.
new writting style
.
too bad it doesnt come with an instruction manual
.

i got it though

i think ive seen some that resemble this one from you.

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

2 posted 2001-01-18 08:25 PM

More I say, more! This did indeed make my dinner break, my dear ..twas four minutes of my connection time well spent, indeed. Beyond creative. Back to research I must go, but once again, I adore this Dopeyoriginal.

Vreni

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-18 09:06 PM

woweee... im lost!!
nice style though.

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2001-01-18 09:13 PM

It's great Dopey, what else can I say?
Bel

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-01-19 06:12 AM

I sure do enjoy your creativity Javier ...
pretty neat concept!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2001-01-19 01:17 PM

Holy amazingness Batman! This is cool, so overly creative I love it. This is going in my library for sure.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

7 posted 2001-01-19 02:03 PM

I agree with Lakewalker. I am amazed at this one Dopey! True talent. I don't know what else to say cause I am truly amazed at this one.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

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