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I only submit songs Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 16NY,NY |
time after time i aint gonna say, i'll wait here for you, as long as it takes. i'll let it all out cant keep it inside, knowing my thoughts wont go past my eyes. CANT KEEP IT UP! DON'T WANNA STAY! I NEED YOU HERE RIGHT NOW!! im (all alone)1x nah nah nah nah nah i cant belive your still my x girlfriend (4x) how many times am i gonna be waiting for you to drop to your knees to realise how much you miss me at night you miss all my love and miss all our fights PACK UP YOUR STUFF! I DONT GIVE A F88K GET OUT OF MY LIFE! im (all alone)1x nah nah nah nah nah My other netpoets user name is the mike sacks, thats the name i post my poetry on, but my songs i post on this. |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
LOVE!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Replying to your own work? Why not wait to find out if someone likes it before you bump it up? |
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I only submit songs Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 16NY,NY |
my g.f. wanted to give feedback, so she made me leave the room as she did it....Long story...wtvr. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Actually there's a word in there that shouldn't be there.....just to let you know.....no more bad words.....it won't get you anywhere here. Frankly, it'll offend your peers and fellow poets here at Passions. However, I will add that I liked the song....just try not to cuss or "half cuss" in the future   I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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