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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
-This is a rough draft so to speak, I'll post the final one, when I'm finished. Tell me what u think!- Unexpected There once was a boy who sat alone at lunch He was made fun of and called names by the popular bunch Each and every day he let the names pass him by He never “fought” back because the boy was too shy The comments didn’t really bother the boy at first Until one day when he felt the emotions inside would burst The anger in the boy built up and grew strong He couldn’t take much more; he knew it wouldn’t be long The boy went home and thought about what he should do He came up with a plan, which he decided to pursue Each day he carefully contemplated his plan If he followed through he knew he would not die a free man The boy began to make preparations for his action He knew this would be big, like a coming attraction Very soon, he told himself the day would come He knew exactly what to do, what would happen to some At first the boy was frightened, but not anymore Nobody knows whats coming,or what they have in store The next day the boy arrived at schol with his plan worked out Nobody would know what brought this on, what its really all about The boy walked in and gave it one last thought He could not be won over, he could not be bought The boy silently walked into the library and began to proceed He was thinking only of himself, not the others in need He pulled out the gun he had been hiding The boy never stopped to think of the pain he’d be providing He went on and shot one of the popular girls She never made fun of him; his mind was in a whirl Then he went on to kill many, many others Never realizing the pain coming to fathers and mothers Maybe the boy would of never resorted to this violent deed If the popular kids would of considered his feelings and his needs [This message has been edited by Angel Bee (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. You brought about the latest happenings in the world into another perspective. I guess it's this whole dominoe effect that occurred.......the "rejects" are finally fighting back, but in all the wrong ways.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was a really great poem. i agree with what Javier said, well put. this would be perfect to present if u have a current events class or in english. Regina |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
thsi was a great poem, its so sad that things come down to this though, i agree with Ina about presenting it in current events -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nicely done here... I liked this one a lot. I guess everyone else has said what I would, so I will leave it at that  Great job.--Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
that was good! it was really really good! & sad!  i luvd it!Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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