John - Do You Believe I Love You?

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-03-24 05:37 PM

I don’t know what else to say,
I could thank you for everything,
That you’ve over done for me,
But I’ll save that for another day.

You’ll always be the one I love,
I’ve adopted you as my lil brother,
You’ll always be known as;
“The one sent from above”.

It’s been over a year,
Since we first became friends,
A friendship like ours,
Won’t soon disappear.

Melissa, God I love her,
I know you miss her too,
The three of us together . . .
Can you say disaster?

With my graduation impending,
I know I must leave soon,
Things may be forced to change,
But our friendship isn’t ending.

i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2001-03-24 10:31 PM

I liked this, there was a raw honesty to it, an understanding between reader and poet, an understanding many strive for but few can grasp.

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2001-03-25 02:41 AM

Very "i hope you had the time of your lifish", or at least, it's how i see it. I have but one year until i graduate, and i'm almost not looking foreward to it. But it is a time of growing, no longer a child but a adult, thrust into the world of gaints, but yourself still a comparative shrimp...i guess we'll have to grow a lot . Good luck and nice work.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2001-03-25 08:25 AM

Wonderful reflections on your friendship and life with this person. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

4 posted 2001-03-25 01:37 PM

I'm sure he believes it, Tamma!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-03-25 06:17 PM

Great job Tamma! I'm sure he believes it if you express your love openly.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-02 03:47 PM

Wonderful expression of feelings Tamma. I'm sure he appreciates this

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

7 posted 2001-04-02 04:37 PM

Wow, I love this Tamma! It's wonderful expression of emotions! And it's good to see something happy from you!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

8 posted 2001-04-02 04:46 PM

Hey,

nice poem....

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

9 posted 2001-04-02 07:14 PM

this was great. Nice poem and honest feelings. well i just found out about Justin so this poem, makes alot more sense.great work.

regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

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