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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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I hear her gagging I see her crying I see her empty tears fall down I hear her screaming I see her wishing I see her hopes fall to the ground I see a girl standing there Who doesnt really seem to care Shes doing what she thinks is best Its her big secret from the rest Hiding in a bathroom stall Knowing she can fool them all Looking at her reflection She sees the opposite of perfection But what can I do, what can I say To make all her tears go away Nothing... I know this is how she'll be I know because this girl is me. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome to Passions! Your poem is very well done, but it definitely has me concerned. Have you talked to someone you trust about this, like a parent or a teacher? If you ever need someone to talk to, Passions is here for you any time!  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Good poem indeedy...very very...will you do me a HUGE favor and e-mail me? That'd be the bestest..carl2lee@hotmail.com k? Oh yeh, I really like yer name. ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." - Leonardo da Vinci |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh my..... I hope you're ok! Please don't do anything self-destructive! It's torture to me when I know of someone specific who does it. Well then, welcome, and incredible poem too. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice first post, but I don't like the nature of the poem. If you need to talk about anything I am here, as I'm sure everyone else at Passions would be. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I do agree with Elizabeth on this matter I hope you do seek a parent, teacher, school counselor's help on this Remember, if you need anyone to talk to, everyone in Passions is most likely to offer an ear Don't forget that ps. pls check your email "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow... very good post. Look, I really hope you're okay, but please feel like you can talk to me. Email me or something... I would love to chat. Anyways, Welcome to Passions and very nice poem. --Marie |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Woah, this poem was amazing. Very very nicely written. You have a lot of talent there and I'd hate to see it go to waste. I hope you are ok and if not then seek help. Hope to see you around more and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Geez... Javier went nuts for this poem. *is jealous*  Well I thought it was quite good as well... the mood to it was very unique, the story itself... was interesting. I once spent an hour just looking at my own reflection in the mirror... In fact, that was yesterday. As all the helpful family members have already said, talk to me anytime. My ICQ # is at the blue flower icon at the top, my AIM SN and email address are in my profile. (I have AIM and MSN.) I just got Yahoo too. hehe... I'm the master of IM programs. The master, I tell you!*ahem*... well my Yahoo ID is wayfinder00. I like to keep in touch with all of the members here, so we may as well start early. So, IM me. And welcome to Passions. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
great job And Welcome!! This reminds me of a friend of mine. strong emotions and a serious problem. please get help ..you'll feel so much better afterwards but keep posting! i cant wait to read more!!*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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