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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-03-15 02:45 AM

The pain never shows
Until the blood flows

Inside the depths of my brain
I don’t know if I’m going insane

I loved her so much
She warmed me with her touch

But I’ve lost that now
Screwed it up somehow

I miss her with all my heart
How could we have ended up apart?

The pain never shows
Even with the emotional blows

The pain never stops
The blood always drops

>¶ØÊ†<

orange()alligator
Junior Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 21

1 posted 2001-03-15 03:33 AM

hey,
i still like it! n whoever came up with the title is the koolest person in the world ;-)--bergundy

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2001-03-15 04:33 AM

Poet:

I liked this one. It's quite an impressive expression of pain.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-03-15 03:00 PM

Oh I love this. It's so depressing, but it's...I odn't knwo how to explain it. It must have been great to write.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2001-03-15 05:08 PM

Cool poem. I enjoyed your descriptions, not the feelings, just the descriptions.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-03-15 08:01 PM

AWESOME poem! I loved it... very emotion-filled... nice job.

--Marie

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

6 posted 2001-03-15 08:57 PM

Thanx for your replies, I can't believe the Moderators didn't take this one down...oh well thanx again.

>¶ØÊ†<

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-03-19 05:59 PM

Once again you've expressed your emotions clearly. Hope thing get better for you.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

8 posted 2001-03-19 06:13 PM

Hey,

Yet another example of your great poetry. Keep it up your filling my library

thanks for the good read. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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