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Empty tears Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 64 |
(I wrote this 1 hr. before the event that "Endless Love Ended" is about) Love is a flame that burns in my heart The reason i wake up each day I know im in love when i feel your touch and hear the sweet things that you say. You dont understand that youre too good for me and i guess that is why youre still here and that youll find a better love than i is my deepest darkest fear the love i have for you truly reaches the stars that dance in the heavens above and no matter what anyone else may say this will be an endless love |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
It's funny how much things change over such a small strech of time. One minute you live simply for the purpose of loving somene else and the next you're living with this "endless" empty hole in your soul. It can do that to you, you know. It's all worth it though. Again and again.... Great poem, Empty Tears.  and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah, some things change dramatically in mere seconds. And sometimes it really hurts. But other times, it's like pulling off a band-aid. See you around. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this.....i know how the changing of emotions takes place all too well. Nicely done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
I will ditto dopey on that. Anyway for the poem itself I believed it was pretty good. Keep writing. Things will get better just be happy with what has come your way today, and keep living for what may come the next.~ By Amanda inspired by Brian |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I ditto Dopey too. I do love the poem and how it shows your sentiments. You did a good job penning your thoughts and feelings "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I ditto along with all the others who ditto'd it =p Amazing things emotions are..thats for sure, I liked it..hope to read more from you.. Kristen |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Emotions should be beaten with a large hammer. All they do is get you into trouble..or is that just me?  Things that change in seconds are never good. ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Love is a flame that burns in my heart The reason i wake up each day I know im in love when i feel your touch and hear the sweet things that you say." This is beautiful! Sometimes love can be the best emotion, and the worst. Great poem. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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