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The Gates of Need |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
* I must say I am sorry for not being here lately I need some time to myself alot has been going on lately. I am trying my best to reply to everyone and I am sorry if it takes a while I'll get there I promise* I walk through the gates, through the shadow of death.... but instead of protecting me...... you take me away Through the darkness of hell.... of fire and sin you twist my life... holding it tightly...but then..... dropping me in to the pit of Despair The fire devours my soul And I am lost forever more in the secret shadows of hell....... where no one dares to dwell. The rocks lacerate my skin... and I am left dying in the cold Where the fire freezes over you and slowly deteriorates your every being.... until there is nothing left of you. And so here I am..... Lying in the coldness of the heat..... listening closely.... whispering little sayings in the air... hoping someday someone will hear my plea..... Someone... Anyone... Please... I beg of you... help me. [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 03-10-2001).] |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
OMG, that's so ...powerful! I'm left dumbstruck...it's just...wow...I hope you're ok. If you want to talk email me or message me on icq, I hope you're ok, what a magnificent poem. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Powerful words here.....seems like you are in need of a shoulder to cry on. ANytime you need one, we're all here for you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Miracle Junior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 22 |
Manda, Were here for ya girly. I know things are tuff you just got to keep going k. love ya |
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shadowmere Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 11Ohio, USA |
This is extrememly powerful. It's always more intriguing to read the poetry of someone whos been there, rather than someone who hasnt and is only writing to be paid. Great work! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
 Wait wait... we can get PAID for this? What an amazing poem, Amanda! You absolutely rule! The dark theme in your latest poetry is outstanding. You do such a nice job on dark poetry. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What's going on Amanda? Hang in there...be strong by the way, I love you recent poems "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Miracle Junior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 22 |
hope you feeling better [This message has been edited by Miracle (edited 03-13-2001).] |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Bryan~ Thank you for the reply it ment alot. Dopey~ what you said ment soo very much to me you have no idea. Miracle~ I know you are Shadowmere~ Thank you Brian~ Thanks for for your reply to my poem..what you said was very nice to have said as well as heard. Acrie~ What's going on.....well....I may talk to you later about it if I need to. Also I am glaid you like my recent poems I have writen [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 03-14-2001).] |
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