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0 posted 2001-01-25 08:21 AM


The first time I ever dreamed of love was when I was almost 14 years old. The first time I dreamed of my dream love, it felt so magical and I felt like I really did find her. I was sad when I woke up, tears went down my face for a while, but I felt that this was a sign that true love was coming. That night in the summer changed my life forever ever since, as I dream of my future love very much all the time up to now, three and a half years since this magical evening

The Dream I Fell In Love
By: Noah Eaton
1/24/01

I was lying outside in the prairie near a flowing river, looking up at the clouds passing by
Far away from any city, out in the heartland of the country
I was tired after a long day of work at home, I just hopped outside to get some fresh air
And enjoy the nature that I love, under the malachite canopy of creation

I watch all the beautiful clouds and their shapes, watched them metamorphose
But then, I see something burst down through one of the clouds slowly
Like a tiny star falling from the sky, melting in natures aurora
A sudden sunburst drenches me, I can’t help but look at the sun, but it soothes my eyes

It gets close to me, I can begin to see a face, the most beautiful one I could ever imagine
I slowly raise myself and sit up, planting my feet backward to stand up, as an angel landed
She had the most brightest sapphire eyes I ever saw, shining with happiness
She had long amber hair, filled with roses and lilacs and so many other beautiful flowers

She wore a silkened dress of white and light purple, weaved in flowers
She had light long pair of wings, which fluttered in the wind, feathers waving with beauty
She walks slowly to me, holding a love-in-the-mist in her hand, over her heart
She begins to sing like a true angel to me, psaltery sounds of the heavens playing along with her voice

“Smell this flower, may your head swim with my love all so true
Share this flower all so magical with me, my sweetheart
I love you”

I smile and nearly faint in beauty, these most beautiful words endlessly reverberate in my heart
I had never felt this way about anyone ever until now, she was the most beautiful girl I could ever see
As I smile of love, my whole body softened in her words, she lightly touches my cheek
She bends in to kiss my lips, as my love for her shined heavenly and she wraps me in her wings as I hold her to kiss her

With our arms, her wings around each other, she begins to soar with me upward, as I hand her a forget-me-not, a token of true love forever
Moved by the graceful sailplane of true lovers uniting, we kiss each other, sighing in the beauty of this magic day
We look up together and see the heavens, the kaleidoscope sconce of serenity spinning slowly, dangled by two cupid lovers
As we melt into the heavens, true souls forever united in the light of true love



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1 posted 2001-01-25 10:18 AM


This is such a wonderful dream!   -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-25 09:20 PM


Thank you for your wonderful reply, SEA, much enjoyed it!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-01-25 10:36 PM


Noah,

I know that I had this same dream. . . thank you for sharing it. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2001-01-26 02:02 PM


Your dream is very gentle and desirable...James
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5 posted 2001-01-26 08:53 PM


James and Sven: Thank you for your wonderful comments, I loved them so much!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-01-26 09:23 PM


Ah, Noah, this dream, I hope that it becomes real for you. How beautifully written this is.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-01-26 11:31 PM


dreams are a wonderful beginning  

hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."


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