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maxtec1
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0 posted 2001-01-24 01:18 PM



You Me
By Richard Maxfield
8-26-2000

I want you my sweet.
My every waking moment.
You are all that is on my mind
When I sleep, I see visions of you.
I catch myself whispering your name.
I close my eyes and dream of your touch.
Feeling my lips kissing your soft lips.
Holding you in my arms every the night.
Tasting the nectar of your neck.
Smell your of hair, touch your face.
Nothing more could I ever need

Brighten my heart with your love.
Fulfill my every dream.
Surrender yourself to me.
As I surrender myself to you.
There will be nothing in love we shall miss.
Loving, tasting, living the experience.
Reveling in the fire of passion.
Come dance in my fire.
Feel the heat of my love.
Warmth of my embrace.
Softness of my kiss.
I want you.
I need you.
May I touch.
May I kiss
May I love.
Forever
Eternity
You
Me



© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-24 09:33 PM


This is very lovely, Richard!

Denise

maxtec1
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2 posted 2001-01-25 04:45 AM


Thank you my friend fo0r your comment
Love and light,
Richard

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3 posted 2001-01-25 09:10 AM


(sigh) Mr. Romance melts our hearts again with his hearts arrow. This is such a lovely, romantic poem Richard! (sigh) May the girl of your dreams come to you, and share a true sweet love with your beautiful heart! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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