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Perhaps...turned tanka two
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Perhaps...turned tanka two |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Perhaps... 'Cross indigo skies Unmasking sorrow's tender Upon you, lay glow To seep, moment to moment Delivering each new dawn Moon in it's daring Outshines the glistening stars Plots the course of love Dances at the feet of night While claiming your heart, perhaps ... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My friend, this is quite lovely... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Sunshine...it is based on my longer poem Perhaps that I posted sometime last night. and elsewhere there was a tanka challenge so I thought I would turn it into one and answer my own Tanka...(on the other site, it was explained that a tanka is really a love letter left behind or sent to the lover and awaits a response by the other, after a night of....*s /pip/Forum44/HTML/000886.html huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Perhaps this is a good way to begin my morning ... I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Glad to see you here, enjoyed the tanka. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these wonderful tanka's....lovely pieces.... Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, perhaps it's perfect, it certainly seems so. Write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
NIce, nice images! Well done. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Naked--Wonderful Tanka. Nicely penned. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge...mornings can be wonderful *s thank you for your visits Seymour- thank you..I am here always..just not always "writing" except in my mind.... huggzz Charisma...I love all forms of poetry...the challenge is in making them flow... ~warm miles to you this cold Jan. day.... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry, Vas and Poeminister...thank you so much for your thoughts...and reading ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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