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X Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-10 09:48 PM


breathing hard
leaving puffs of vapour in the frosty morning air
the tree climber heaves himself up to surmount the tree
finally.
branches groaning under his weight
he stills himself to quiet it's sway
looking downward he checks the tree for warps and rot
"looks good" he mumbles to himself

off to his left a bird nest, abandoned for the season
are all that is left of a family of Robins
hands busy now, he hauls the saw to his side

hand
over
hand
over
hand
over
hand

steady and slow, the rhythm almost sleep inducing
there, now he's ready to start his day's work

work
if you could call it that
god he thrived on thin air and pitch it seems
the cold never even touches him

work
if you could call shaping a monstrous tree
into a piece of art work

work
if you could call saving a tree from itself and mother nature

work

funny how early this morning
when he first touched this behemoth
he felt the sickness these branches hid

funny how each day as he touches a new tree
the feelings grow sharper, more palpable

funny how people looked at him strangely at times
and called him "the man who talks to trees"

but it was as if he had learned the secret language of the trees
for he knew their need before he ever climbed a branch
and he cherished that gift like a priceless treasure

day's end now
weary, he descends from the heights
to go gratefully home to his waiting family

but first
he places his hands on the ancient bark once more
and he finds, as he suspected, only health there now

satisfied
he smiles
and calls it a day




[This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 01-10-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-10 09:53 PM


Sounds like a wonderful man........doing a wonderful job!   -SEA
Martie
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2 posted 2001-01-10 10:56 PM


Hi...glad to see you...I loved reading this...so interesting look at a job that is more then a job...well done!!!
Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-01-11 12:25 PM


His love for his job and that tree, and your love for him radiates from this poem. Wonderfully done!!  
X Angel
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4 posted 2001-01-11 10:48 AM


yup wonderful indeedy!
it is neat to actually know someone who feels like this about trees!
  
~H

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Colin
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5 posted 2001-01-11 03:57 PM


WOW!

It's also wonderful to be loved by someone who loves me in part for loving the job I love (or something like that   )

It's strange... I'm kind of at a loss to find a reply! Yes, it's true, I LOVE my trees. They all have their own personalities, they're all different. I guess, yes, in a way, I do talk with trees, but it all seems so "natural" (sorry about the pun) to me.

Some people probably think I'm weird for that. Ah well, let them   Heather, you've noticed that part of me, accepted it, and grown to love me, in part for that. For that, and for the beautiful poem, I thank you! Yet again darling, your poetry has touched my very soul.

Colin xxx

ps. the whole post above is accompanied by a shy smile  

[This message has been edited by Colin (edited 01-11-2001).]

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-01-11 04:26 PM


Isn't it wonderful that one can look into another's art, and see not only his humanity, but his caring, and then turn around and share it so well and willingly with the rest of the world...

Congratulations to BOTH of you...

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