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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-23 11:01 AM


                                   Fire’s Kiss

                                    

What is much too much?
Is it the heat of my touch?            
Does it burn through you?
Can you feel the pull too?
Come follow where I lead
I’ll satisfy your hungry need

                                        Is this the touch you crave?
                                        In my liquid heat to bathe
                                        Do you want to feel all this?
                                        Be inflamed by my hot kiss
                                        Can you deny passions fire
                                        Refuse to stand with desire

Will you stay here in night?
Washing your soul in delight
Fall into this vortex of heat
Watch my pulse throb its beat
Feel the air blaze up in flame
Play with magic in loves games
            
                                        Do you want to touch me?
                                        If so then let go, float free
                                        Let my fire spread through
                                        Allow the flames to heat you
                                        To burn in your hearts night
                                        Filling you with passions light

This heat is there to seek
Inside the flames just peek
I welcome you into my fire                
Feel the flames burn higher
Come dance in flames bliss
Sink eternally into fires kiss


                                      Marsha

                                      
                                              




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-01-23 11:03 AM


good thing I'm all female....whew....

Marsha
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2 posted 2001-01-23 12:25 PM


Kari love, it's done nothing but rain here for days I had to raise my temperature some how  
Thank you love, yet more brevity  
Take care
                Majestic Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-01-23 12:28 PM




Wow! Marsha! Wow!  What hot and amazing descriptions.  This is just wow!  I'm printing out a copy right now!  

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2001-01-23 12:30 PM


Nice to see you still growing.  Wonderful presentation and great flow in the cadence
and rhyme sceme.

Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-23 12:36 PM


Hot and steamy!  Me likes  

Poeminister

Songbird
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6 posted 2001-01-23 01:12 PM


Wow! Like your graphics and your graphical poetry..I could feel the flames..
AniKay83
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7 posted 2001-01-23 02:58 PM


Whew! That's hot! Oooooo..... I have goosebumps! And I think I have someone who needs to read this... LOL. Well done Marsha.

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie


peppermint35
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8 posted 2001-01-24 02:20 AM


Wow, oh wow!!!  Great job here....I'm keeping this one to show someone special too   I truly love your work, ya know???

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Marsha
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9 posted 2001-01-24 06:16 PM


I'm really sorry about this but I didn't want to miss saying thank you to each one for reading and replying, but I'm off out on the razz!! (Oh deep joy!) No it'll be fun, but I daren't leave this reply any longer, or someone will think that I'm unappreciative and I'm not.
So thank you,
Melissa, so sweet of you glad you liked it

Mark, thank you sincerely, more of my stretching.

Poeminister, thank you so very very muchly

Songbird, thank you Margie has been teaching me.

AniKay83, I hope it works / worked   Thank you

Pepper love, thank you so truly.

Now see you all later, when I'm three sheets to the wind and feeling no pain.  

Take care love
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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