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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-01-23 12:46 PM

Angel

Whatever's done is done
whatever's to be will be;
But Angel--O my Angel,
Won't you please return to me...

Poeminister

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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

1 posted 2001-01-23 01:55 AM

What a weight of emotion in these few lines!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-01-23 02:01 AM

Angel------------Go home !!!

Mr.Magoo
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since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

3 posted 2001-01-23 02:11 AM

Even though its a small write its full of meaning.
Very Nice
Mr.Magoo

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-01-23 03:19 AM

Peppermint, slicklady, and Mr. Magoo
Thank you guys for your comments...glad you enjoyed

take care
Poeminister

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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-01-23 05:19 AM

i agree..short and tightly packed with emotion....

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

6 posted 2001-01-23 05:27 AM

When it comes to Angels....there is no
"small" thing...this is beautiful and the
beauty of it is only intensified by the
briefness of it...give the reader more time
to absorb and enjoy....excellent writing~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-01-23 08:44 AM

Not only a poem, but a heartfelt plea...

enjoyed, of course!

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-01-23 08:52 AM

Oh I like! Sweet, tender pleading filled with sincerity of heart.

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

9 posted 2001-01-23 10:40 AM

~Nice. Very nice. Inside exposed. Is beautiful. *Peace.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

10 posted 2001-01-23 05:34 PM

PM~ this pulls at my heart.......makes me ache for you........

-SEA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-01-23 05:58 PM

Yes I think these same words for a certain angel...James

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

12 posted 2001-01-23 06:03 PM

small poem...but straith from your heart....hope she will return.

take care my friend

((warm hugs))
Charisma

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

13 posted 2001-01-23 06:36 PM

Sometimes the best way of saying something is to be simple and honest. Then, only a few words can say so much. You are a pefect example of this.

Well done.
I hope your Angel comes back.

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness

rascalx
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

14 posted 2001-01-23 06:46 PM

a short but powerful plea from your heart...I love it! I hope your Angel returns

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