»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #12
»
Only She
| Open Poetry #12 |
|
Only She |
|
|
Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Only She Late waves splash a line of pale lace dripping slow back again into the gray sea their life's remnants awash along the jetty In a moments time like the ink from her heart's well trumpeting ardent songs on thirsty paper the sea fans my sight with vibrant rushes of unending birth My heart squeezing firm her unyielding confirmation as only she knows the worth of my transcendence I bow to grace the warm sand beneath my knees Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Robert Joseph - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Awesome poem, Robert Joseph! |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Excellent poem, Robert! Yes, only she knows of your existance in her heart, and you share a love with her that blossoms heavenly. Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
*Ink from hearts well*...just when i think i have heard it all you amaze me again..love it Robert..as always  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
||
|
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful poem, Robert! You have such a way with words! I love it! sp  Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Robert! Just lovely!! Denise |
||
|
Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Martie Noah SP Victoria Denise Thanks so much, each reply is greatly appreciated. Robert Joseph |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ This is positively fragrant with imaged thoughts - 'I bow to grace the warm sand beneath my knees' How very much I enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful descriptive piece. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only she? Only you! My word, this is wonderful! |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very very beautiful...words worthy of a goddess....you've such a romantic heart and quite a gift of imagery... |
||
|
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RJ~ this is GORGEOUS!!! Makes my heart ache for the ocean.......... -SEA |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
||
|
Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, Poeminister, Sunshine, serenity, SEA, and vandana... Thank you all so much, I'm grateful for each reply. Robert Joseph [This message has been edited by Robert Joseph (edited 01-23-2001).] |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Robert, I like your style. Very nice, and very well written. BC |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
OH my RJ... I have missed a lot of your work so I'm glad I have the opportunity to go hunting today ~smile~ Simply beautiful... KStrokes of ink, words, dreams like Waking mountains make intimate conversations With my shadow From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes |
||
|
Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Bill Sevren Thanks so much your responses are greatly appreciated. Robert Joseph |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
My heart squeezing firm her unyielding confirmation as only she knows the worth of my transcendence I bow to grace the warm sand beneath my knees ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Great imagery. Great write! Deb |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
