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“Heart to Heart”
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“Heart to Heart” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 I know that you are lonely, by the way your heart met mine… All brave and true, but somehow, not so sure… If anyone looked closely, I am sure that they would find… Your heart was searching, for a heart that’s pure… Let two hearts joined together never let a day go by, where love is reaching out, but all in vain… And never let those hearts believe it does no good to try… If hearts give up, the “ache” is all that’s gained… So, here I stand alone, my humble heart within my hand… I know you’re out there watching, as I speak… And all this love I offer you, will help you understand… That heart to heart’s the only road I seek… My gentle heart is calling… Can you hear it on the wind? Listen to the softly whispering breeze… Then let your heart unlock it’s door, and let my heart come in… And keep my love… Forever… Won’t you, please? I'd like to thank Mark B. for the beautiful gift of hearts at the top of the page!!  >>Smiles from Sunny<< [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Truely wonderful my sister of poetry. If this don't get him then they might as well pronounce him dead. Very tenderly written and full of the pure emotion we have come to expect from you. ps....I am glad that you were able to put the graphic to good use. I knew you would anyway. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Brother..... < !signature-->I just had to write something to go with that beautiful set of hearts!! Sometimes, the picture is the inspiration....I love these hearts and their path they take to join one another! Thank you...... Smiles from Sunny [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny1, what a write! The long winters are good for muse it seems. I loved the flow and style of this, and the emotion...*sigh* write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Keth..... Yes, the muse is becoming more active in this pre-Spring phase!! But I don't mind at all, as long as she keeps me writing!! Thank you, my friend!! <~>Smiles from Sunny<~> |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, though this is a romantic poem, it makes me think of the two of us, out there with our hearts extended, waiting for them to be accepted. Wonderful, loved it, and the graphics, too. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Sunny, This is good Sunny, this is a good one. I like it very much. BC |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunny, This is the soul-food I thrive off of...a beautiful piece in word and presentation. Robert Joseph |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sandra ~~~ Yes....our hearts are always extended....that's just a part of being very human, I think!! I am glad you enjoyed this one, my best friend!! ~~~ evenin' Bill ~~~ Ah, yes......I am glad that you saw this one, as I love the romantic style of writing so very much, and I know you do also. Thank you for visiting!! ~~~ R.J. ~~~ If your soul could feast off of these humble words of mine, than I am very happy, because I succeeded with this poem. I do appreciate your wonderful reply!! Thank you!! <~>Smiles from Sunny<~> |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful my twin absolutely beautiful |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww Sunny, such a beautiful one. I loved this but I love all that you write!  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Paula ~~~ Thank you, dear twin o' mine!! I hope it made you smile!! ~~~ Sauni ~~~ Good to see you, my friend, and I do appreciate the nice things you say in your replies, I truly do!!! Thank you!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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