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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Land of Dreams In dark of night amid enchanting breeze Whispered thoughts of pleasure tease Within tranquil depths of aqua seas Resides belief in what is meant to be... Disrobe of heartache and relinquish sorrow Embrace gentle wings of new tomorrows Caress the tide of neverending sighs Enrapture the essence as spirits soars high Close thine eyes and envision this Stars colliding in nightfall bliss Glimmering beauty of fantasy delight While touching hand of understand in flight And in thy soul love shall kindle its glow Beyond reality in dreams we take hold... *~coco~*  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing Coco...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Where did you find that beautiful painting?..and your words matched perfectly. loved it Coco..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your words guide us in land of dreams.....love these wonderful gently piece. and fabulous picture who fits your words so well. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My sincere thanks to you three... And I hope you truly know that your comments have always brought me much joy... *~coco~* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Coco.... < !signature-->this one takes me away into a beautiful space and I love the fantasy, and the picture also!! Very wonderful writing here, my dear friend!! Thank you for the get-a-way!! >>Smiles from Sunny<< [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW........what a beautiful write my friend. Your words paint a lovely image and of course they are accented with a perfect piece of art to go with them but it doesn't come close to the beauty in your words alone. So very nice to see you post one for us to enjoy. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is special You've penned this so beautifully! It's always nice to see a beautiful picture too! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Wonderful. Fantastic, I love the picture you have here, it adds to the feel of this so perfectly, though the poem itself paints such a pretty picture. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
beautiful Coco. . .I can tell you've been there before PoetFriend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Coco--Beautiful write. I love the image too. Nicely penned. Poeminister < !signature--> "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ Stunning poem and beautiful picture.....wow, love this !! Such beauty will be saved for future reading,now this goes into my library! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you everyone for your most kind replies... This poem comes from an inspired dream... Hugs2Uall4appreciating this vision with me... *~coco~* |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I was already captivated by the images and emotions you painted with your words... but then when I saw the picture... WOW! A perfect complement to your poem. Beautifully written. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh, this is so beautiful! You are so great at picking a picture to fit each of your wonderful poems! Ah yes, I dream all the time, dreaming is my favorite part of the day. Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ And you would know that I love the soft beauty of this piece. Perfectly entwined ... your thoughts, the cake - the graphic, the icing ! Enjoyed this so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Rascalx, Mistletoe and Marge... Thank you for your delightful comments... I am happily pleased that you 3 appreciated this... *~coco~* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is amazing, what an imagination you have! Wow! And the graphic goes perfectly with your words I'm printing out a copy for myself, I just love this, what a great escape into your fantasy realm!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In dark of night amid enchanting breeze Whispered thoughts of pleasure tease Within tranquil depths of aqua seas Resides belief in what is meant to be... Disrobe of heartache and relinquish sorrow Embrace gentle wings of new tomorrows Caress the tide of neverending sighs Enrapture the essence as spirits soars high =============== CC..your cadence in this rises off the page as does your imagery very cool writing... wonderful phrasing well done my poetess ..very well done Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Such beauty surrounded by beauty. Very nice. Rich |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Melissa, your enthusiasm once again has me tickled pink, thank you sweetie I greatly appreciate your kindness... JM, my goodness PoetFriend, you chose the stanzas of which I treasure the most and that hun has me smiling galore... Spiked, muaah on cheekz for your tender reply Goodnite MyFriends *~coco~* |
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