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If I Could
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If I Could |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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If I Could I would stand where Adam stood In a strand of green and wood. Walking in the garden path Void the beckon of its math. Listening to the purring brook Not a picture in a book. Watching bird and butterfly Drinking beauty without why. Stretching in the morning sun Standing there as only one. Surfing in the morning breeze All without a set of keys. Feeling essence all about Living life without a doubt. Knowing Eve is waiting him Not a thought about a sin. God I miss those good old days Lord I miss those good old ways. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He takes a bow and wraps sentiment {~,^} |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, What a write, temptation personified! Write on in song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful thoughts of peaceful simpliicity. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Watching bird and butterfly Drinking beauty without why." Wonderfully said. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It must nice inside your head, seymour! You always leave me feeling such peace. Methinks you are a sage. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Seymour, this is such a sweet write it left this reader with a sense of tranquility... Thank you PoetFriend for a splendid start to my day2day... *~coco~* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Watching bird and butterfly Drinking beauty without why. Stretching in the morning sun Standing there as only one. Surfing in the morning breeze All without a set of keys. Feeling essence all about Living life without a doubt. Knowing Eve is waiting him Not a thought about a sin. God I miss those good old days Lord I miss those good old ways. ====================== very very cool o so wise wizard of poetic perfection. Your poetry is the apple of my Eve  *winkiewinkie* later-adam-gator me Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, It's always sentiment. *L* Kethry, Sweet comp, thank you. Vas, Sounds simple doesn't it? Poe, Thanks Poe. Serenity, And we think you are a beauty. Coco, Tranquility is nice, thank you. JM, The apple of your Eve? That has titillating Connotations. Winkiewinkie Randy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yeah I miss these good old days too. fabulous piece as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Glad I'm not the only one. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"All without a set of keys" You really do make me laugh This was a great poem Liz |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy guy...you alway knew what to say...even in the beginning. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like Paradise to me, Seymour! This is lovely! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Glad I could make you smile. Love Sy Martie, Thank you sweet. Dsnyder, It is a type of paradise. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If only... You know how to make one yearn, that's for sure, Sy. Thank you for such a beautiful gift to start my day with. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Thank you for reading and commenting. |
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