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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~Wandering & Wondering~ < !signature-->Sometimes I feel so empty My mind keeps wandering... I can't concentrate I want to feel your closeness I want to hear your thoughts I want to touch your soul But instead we are apart My mind keeps wandering... Thinking about everything about you Thinking about our love Thinking about how much I miss you Sometimes I feel so empty My mind keeps wandering... Wondering will there be a time We will be together again? The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If there is love then never doubt where it will take you or the power it carries with it to make things shine. Wonderful expression of the heart my friend. Nice to see you spoil us with one again. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LL love, this is absolutely beautiful, it really is an ecellant piece from you. It's so amazingly wonderful. And remember, the Phooenix Rescue Squad are on their way to you right now.  Utterly superb love, definitely a keeper Take care love Mushy Remember love we are here if you need us Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LL~ The stunning beauty of this weave...and the heart felt lines of gold take my breath away...or perhaps it's the reflections that I see in the message that you wove...no matter what it is that drew me in...I applaud your verse of heart~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LL, I was wondering how such simple and beautiful words could be woven into something so powerful and stunning! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ Such a heartfelt piece, tenderly rendered. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~Hey cowboy~..Nice to see you here spoilin' me with the sweet words as well.. You said it well, if there is love.. never doubt...Yep, I think I like that one..Thanks for stoppin' in ..Hugs ~LL~~Marsha~..Sweet, sweet you...  Always so full of praises for me..Rescue Squad comin' to save me, huh? Just in the knick of time to, I think..hehe,,Thanks so much for being here..Means much , you know..Hugs and love..~LL~~Holly~..How wonderful to see you here.. Thanks so much for the sweet, kind words..Always, you are so generous with me.. Glad you got drawn in.. Thank you so much.Hugs ~LL~ ~Kethry~..SO glad you seen the powerful and stunning in my simple words..You being a "master" at this yourself, it means much coming from you..Thanks for takin' the time to read..I really appreciate it.. Hugs ~LL~ ~Marge~..Thanks for your kind words..Like so many of the others here, it means lots to have you take the time to stop and read..Hugs to you... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Ive done a lot of this too...it never ends...wondering...wandering...but then where would the wonders be if we did not wonder or wander. Thanks for the sharing of your feelings lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you.. emotional and sincere write Lady L ... touches the place where we keep our doubts and dreams. beauty in your honest words my friend well done ... keep em coming Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LL~ such longing and love here.......so beautifully done......I really like this a lot! -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lady Lightening, Wonderfully expressed feelings in this. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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lisad Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22 |
~LL~, Such beautiful words written straight from the heart... I know that there are many people that share the same exact feelings... Love ya cupts, lisad |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~wandering~...How wise you are!! My thoughts exactly...Thanks so much for the read and your thoughts..Much appreciated...Hugs ~LL~ ~Janet Marie~...Hey girl...SO glad you came in and read my simple words....I know you know where these come from...Be nice if we didn't have to have these thoughts, huh? Oh well, it's a vicious cycle that seems neverending most of the time..But then, there is that little glimmer of hope that rests in me heart....hehe..and this you KNOW...Love ya..Thanks so much for being here..I can always count you and this I know.... Hugs ~LL~~SEA ~...How wonderful to get here finally and see you here..Always such a smile for me to read your sweet, kind words..And yes, you're still shinin'.. Hugs ~LL~~Poeminister~...Thanks for stoppin' in and for your kind words..I appreciate it much.. Hugs ~LL~ ~lisad~...Straight from the heart...well, you know they don't come from anywhere but there.. So good to see you here..Always you are there, no matter what, no matter when and for that I love ya girlie...cupts... Hugs ~LL~< !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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