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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How is it that sun, so soon, rises to compete with moon? and all the stripes are painted, thin... how can I start anew, again? coral-pink,compete with grays contrast of the better days a staircase, that goes either way exit out---or enter in... oh sweet love she sings to me... beckons, calling, trails replete yes I walk on weary feet and naught but faith to oil the gate. the eerie call of beckoning... the wax of moon to seal my fate. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...I am so enjoying this....thank you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How is it that sun, so soon, rises to compete with moon? and all the stripes are painted, thin... how can I start anew, again? coral-pink,compete with grays contrast of the better days a staircase, that goes either way exit out---or enter in... ============== morning me twin... or in your case ... sweet dreams  me thanks ya for this lil gem this morn me loves ya too me When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Oh, how I love your poetic waxing ~ 'oh sweet love she sings to me... beckons, calling, trails replete yes I walk on weary feet and naught but faith to oil the gate. the eerie call of beckoning... the wax of moon to seal my fate.' Slick enough to oil that gate !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"the wax of moon to seal my fate." Oh...great lines. This is well written ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is absolutely stunning. Kathleen |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
felt this way it is so hard to begin again or try with love again..nice romantic feel here.. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Serenity, Lovely words. Beautifully penned. Poeminister "I drank at every vine The last was like the first I came upon no wine So wonderful as the thirst" ~Millay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi serenity, I enjoyed this very much, well done serenity. BC |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Heya S'renity! Push and pull, and it gets ya nowhere, eh? That's one of the many crappy facts of life ain't it... How've ya been? Email comin at ya...if I forget...slap me or somethin! *grins* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sunshine---thanks so much for reading, and I wish only that I were as prolific as you! (Do you really write three a DAY?) You amaze me and also make me have fits of jealousy!!!! JM---love ya muchly as you know...I thank you for taking the time to read...I need to play "catch-up" too...pant pant pant....serenity jogs on to the next...lol Marge...lol, you me and THAT MOON...hugs to my partner in moonwatch! hoot? thank you my friend and hugs and prayers are sent your way! Kathleen? Much gratitude to the sweetest heart! artsygrl? sigh, ain't it though? I get SO confused...thanks for reading lovie...hope I have time today to return the favor! Poe---you replies always make me smile, I thank you much for your kindness. YOu too, are a sweetheart! Thank you Bill...what a nice surprise! Hugs to you! M.I. or should that be M.I.A.? WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN???? Must actually be sleeping at night now...(giggle) Thanks for the response, and yes, I will check my e mail...(don't make me come over there...) Lol...always glad to hear from you, m'friend! HUGS TO FORUM. Thanks to all. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You do feelings so well....makes me think of a great conductor with an orchestra!!! Loved this read Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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