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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2001-01-21 12:02 PM

In wide river ever flowing,
Lives the spirit of all knowing,
Born in mountains never scaled,
Spawned of winds by gods exhaled.
Nurtured 'mid high alpine nook,
Weaned in icecapped mountain brook,
Ever flowing to the sea,
Seeking out eternity.
Four winds converge, on river's crest,
North to south, and east to west,
Silent eddys every flowing,
In the vortex of all knowing.
Unseen currents of the river,
Spirit to the sea deliver,
Flowing, flowing to the sea,
Spirit flows eternally.

WinterTalon
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since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

1 posted 2001-01-21 12:06 PM

I positively loved the flow of this one! Very catchy.

Born in mountains never scaled,
Spawned of winds by gods exhaled.

Those are two very awesome lines. *nods* Very, very...< !signature-->

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

[This message has been edited by PoeticEnchantress (edited 01-21-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-01-21 04:28 AM

Mike~
What a lovely cadence to your musings.
The spirit runs freely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2001-01-21 06:27 AM

Enchantment mixed with your exquitite descritions of nature make for a superb poem
Very beautful
Liz

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-21 07:38 AM

Not at all what the title led one to imagine....much, much better....

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2001-01-21 09:16 AM

Oh...please do muse some more. Great write here

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-01-21 11:56 AM

Mike--I sure do love your early morning musings...this one is so richly painted...utterly beauiful!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2001-01-21 11:32 PM

You weave the gold that lines the skies
Mike...this is beautiful as
always....stunning even~

You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-01-21 11:37 PM

The imagery and flow in this are wonderful. Excellent writing.

Poeminister

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

9 posted 2001-01-21 11:44 PM

Thank you all so much for the very gracious replies. I appreciate the comments and you're taking the time to read and respond to my poetry.

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

10 posted 2001-01-21 11:51 PM

it's amazing that I to wrote about nature tonight must be something in the air, loved it!

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