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Under A Little Bit Of Light
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Under A Little Bit Of Light |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Under A Little Bit Of Light There is the place I hold you almost as if you are here And my mind holds you as real as the night Oh, I loved the heart God placed beside me right then As I watched you lying under a little bit of light... Like rays of sun just dimmed by a few passing clouds Resembles the way such light lay on your face And so the semi- dark gave light to an even brighter road One that took forever it seems we've waited to take... And so hot is the sun when it can't cool down Like the warmth when I found my way inside So we lay there beneath a newer look at night And go with the rhythm our hands make beneath that sky... When in and out defines the stronger breath I can hear I vow to live in this pleasant feeling together So I pray that such moments give new meaning to you That this touch just means I'll love you forever... Under a little bit of light I sure held it all Amen, can be heard as I prayed I closed my eyes to the little bit of light I see And lie there and smile there to such love made... Saun Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"When in and out defines the stronger breath I can hear I vow to live in this pleasant feeling together So I pray that such moments give new meaning to you That this touch just means I'll love you forever" This is a beautiful love poem. The imagery is amazing, and your writing style is excellent. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very nice... |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Purtiful... absolutely purtiful! ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome back and thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I have missed reading your poems because you always present them with such heart and emotion. This was truely beautiful and I hope you get to spend more time with us but if not, we will be here when you are able to be. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank all of you for taking the time to read this poem. Love ya Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ This is so lovely ~ Your images are layed across the page so delicately ~ 'Under a little bit of light I sure held it all' Enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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