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Seasonal Heart Wishing Early Change
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Seasonal Heart Wishing Early Change |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Captured rage ignites with the bite, Of a crisp winter wind. Shush now lips that kiss with the fervor, Of a rain destined for flood waters. For in the heavens there is blue, But tis a cold blue at that, And the ground is a frozen empty site. Once there were rampaging limbs, Casting in all directions like flailing emotions. Cease now, Winter And grant my wish now for Spring, Because there is newness and promise there, And I tire of your drizzle on my face, Your tentacles of ice upon my heart. And when the winter wind ceases to blow, And incessantly whisper for attention, It will carry with it all these doubts, That it so gladly arrived with. Cease now winter, Let go of my heart. Cease now winter, Take away my grief. Cease now Winter. Be gone! Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne~ Good emoting. 'Cease now, Winter And grant my wish now for Spring, Because there is newness and promise there' I'm ready also !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
I hate spring and summer with a passion unknown to man or beast. May the winter forever hide what should otherwise never be seen. Let the coldness protect what is otherwise too weak to survive... Good poem, tho... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Oh boy, do I hear ya on this one! This winter is especially cold, but maybe it's just me! But, anyway, I'm routing Spring on, too! Great write! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
oh!ho! this was a cold, cold piece, I especially loved "And I tire of your drizzle on my face, Your tentacles of ice upon my heart." excellently written. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a cold heart wishes to be warm?? ah but my friend. . . you have already shown us in your words that your heart is warm. . . no matter the season. . . wonderful writing from you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you all for reading so far.  I'd comment more, but I'm off to read; and perhaps I might post. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice read of your heart felt winter I myself love all the seasons But sometimes they do stay to long Care to sit in front of a burning fire..place And warm up... Great poem! [This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Insect, What to do when warm fires turn hot? Thanks for reading this. Its more about seasons of the heart than seasons of the earth if that makes sense. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Iwritethepoems Junior Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 25 |
real and seasonal,, lovely verse |
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