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Loki
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since 2001-01-10

Posts 4

0 posted 2001-01-10 02:59 PM

This is a poem I have submitted to the main site. I'm not usually one for love poetry, being more of a brooding sort, but my wife brings out the bright side in me. Any comments would be appreciated, thanks!

Thoughts of you sweeten my soul
Like fresh spring flowers in my mind
Your essence washes over me
Till your spirit and mine are twined

Inside my heart I've built a home
Of contented sighs and fragrant air
And I know when my hand cannot find your own
I can always find you there

Like the brush of lips on the nape of my neck
Sends shivers down my spine
So is the sensation of pure elation
Just knowing that you are mine

I can feel you within me, like sun on my skin
only warming from inside
You dance through my dreams twixt the willow trees
that weep in their pride for my bride

Your presence in me brings my mind to peace
Like walking alone on the beach
And you flow through my blood and over my heart
As the syrup from a peach

My every perception is colored by you
You are sewn through the quilt of my life
I'm entranced and enthralled every day anew
You're my love, my heart, my wife.

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-01-10 03:19 PM

Welcome

You have done a beautiful job showing how your wife brings the best out in you. These two lines are my favorite.
My every perception is colored by you
You are sewn through the quilt of my life

[This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 01-10-2001).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-01-10 03:31 PM

A nice show of your appreciation for your wife..James

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-10 03:37 PM

Welcome to Passions! Glad to see a wife can bring out good in a passionate man! Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Loki
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since 2001-01-10

Posts 4

4 posted 2001-01-10 03:52 PM

Thanks for the welcome and comments all. Just don't get the impression I'm actually NICE or anything, heheh.

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2001-01-10 04:29 PM

And ain't she lucky for you!
Nice love, nice write.
And WELCOME to the joint!

/:^)==
=#==

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-01-10 05:10 PM

So many wonderful lines... well done! And welcome!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-01-10 08:44 PM

Loki~
Welcome to Passions family of poets and friends.

Well ..... ya' coulda fooled me !
Not that I think you're actually NICE or anything,
but I think I do trust your wife's good taste !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-01-10 08:49 PM

Welcome to Passions Loki, this was simply beautiful! It just doesn't come from the heart any clearer than this ... you have a very fortunate bride! Hope to read more!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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