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Tammy16
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0 posted 2001-01-19 11:10 PM


Make love to me this morning
While the world is fresh and new
When the flowers are first awakening
And the grass is covered in dew.

Make love to me this afternoon
Take me by surprise
I long to see the passion
As I gaze into your eyes.

Make love to me this evening
Beneath a moonlit sky
Love me for an eternity
Don't ever say goodbye.

Make love to me at midnight
When all is quiet and dark
I hope this feeling never fades
Our hearts will never part.


© Copyright 2001 Tammy16 - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2001-01-19 11:23 PM


So sweet! The feeling never changes but proving it so many times a day does. LOL
SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-19 11:44 PM


Tammy~ beautiful thoughts here........it would be great if they could keep up with us eh?  -SEA
Frankie
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3 posted 2001-01-22 09:41 AM


SEA - So true...Thanks for your thoughts.

Inot2b - Thanks for the read....appreciate it.

Frankie


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4 posted 2001-01-22 06:27 PM


I love this!  I can't think of anything else to say except that I love this!  Great romantic write, Tammy!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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5 posted 2001-01-23 11:59 AM


enjoy the read
Frankie
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6 posted 2001-01-23 01:33 PM


Snowpants and Vandana

Thank you for stopping by - glad you enjoyed.

Tammy

mark woolard
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7 posted 2001-01-23 01:46 PM


rompilicious!
Frankie
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8 posted 2001-01-23 01:58 PM


Mark - Thanks....love your reply.

Tammy

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9 posted 2001-01-23 02:08 PM


Tammy? This is so sweet...I know this feeling you write of so well...mmmmm....
hmmmm....gotta go now...lol

and Welcome, to the forum...(don't mind me, I'm always late...)

Frankie
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10 posted 2001-01-23 02:21 PM


Serenity - Better late than never.....thank you for stopping by and reading and thanks for the sweet reply.

Tammy

AniKay83
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11 posted 2001-01-23 03:36 PM


Very sweet, but what do you do with the other 15 min. left in the day?

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie


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12 posted 2001-01-23 05:38 PM



Beautiful!  Flows perfectly with some tender lines  

Take care,
Melissa~


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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