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JCGF
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0 posted 2001-01-19 10:12 PM



I long to take a walk down a road to a place within my dreams.
You're the one that should be there waiting for me at the end of this road but you won't be
because your afraid, though it seems.

If I take this walk, I know we'll be blessed
Please don't be afraid
I promise, I'll live for your happiness.

Along this walk, can you picture what I'm wearing?
I have on all white and people are staring.

Will you ever allow me to take the steps to the rest of my life?
Step by step, inch by inch.
Will you ever find it in your heart to make me your wife?

If I could only take this walk,
Just one time
Life would be complete
and you would be mine!

© Copyright 2001 Tammy - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2001-01-19 10:23 PM


You have made your plea and if he sees it I hope you get the answer you want. If he is too scared to take the step with you, find someone who will be strong and give you the love you deserve.
athena4
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2 posted 2001-01-19 10:32 PM


JC,
    How beautiful.  I hope you will be able to wear that white dress someday. Lovely...
          Elise

tracie66
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3 posted 2001-01-19 11:47 PM


JC~
Welcome to passions  
Hope it all turns out right, your feelings are so well expressed in this...well done
~HUG~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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4 posted 2001-01-20 12:03 PM


Wonderfully done   -SEA
JCGF
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5 posted 2001-01-20 10:10 AM


Thank you For your responses.  I think I'm just feeling sorry for myself but thanks agains.

JC  

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