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Phenomenal Miracles |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Phenomenal Miracles In the gentle of this day soft wows abound in the light of the rays gently cascading down aged old eyes wide open with the brilliance of young on the wind a whisper of ancient songs being sung a phenomenal day for miracles not in me, not in me not to see, not to see grace and beauty surrounding all of we the dreamers dreaming even though bombs are falling hurricanes rage, quoth the sage terribleness reigns in places yes there are abject faces we hold them all in our graces praying for phenomenal miracles looser, looser, let loose the grip on hope and peace and quietude sending forth on wing of dove phenomenal miracles of love so today, this moment, this space in time should you read these words, then be kind spread a phenomenal miracle, one of yours and let your prayer be silently heard. 01.19.01 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, utterly stunning this really is the best from you, keep flying high kid, I'll be in your jetstream. Truly wonderful dear heart, absolutely ace. Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Lovely thoughts, lovely poem. *L* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Tender thoughts, softly spoken. last stanza...a great summation |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A lovely, inspiring message here  You always seem to think of others in this world, and as always I enjoy your poetry Take care, Melybee  The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written sunshine..loved it.. HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you're Aces yourself...thank you... Sy...lovely words from a lovely man...thank you...{~,^} Virginia...summation is easy, working in the legal arena...thank you.... Melybee....bingo....thank you.... Thank you for the hugs, Victoria.... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Phenomenal poem - even more phenomenal last verse - gripped me - held me - it said 'pay attention' and so much more - your writing is supurb astounding quality here |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you very much, Mr. Yeats...your response comes across as applause!... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely thoughts and message in this piece. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes...... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poeminister...thank you... SEA...bless your yes... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Karilea...Im speechless here...this is wonderful |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
methinks the title pertains to all of your poetry..... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--Thank you for the miracle of your pen and heart....hugs for these thoughts. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula....dusting off poems are we? How surprised I was to see this return.... 'Deer....you are far too kind....but it is nice to feel the blush this early morning.... Martie...you've given 6200 hugs yourself, did you know that? You are all phenomenal miracles, you know that, don't you? |
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