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Blondie
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0 posted 2001-01-16 10:22 PM


* attempt at free verse *

I first shall say that I do not know Liz well,
as a matter of fact I have maybe spoken with her twice.
But from what I have heard
and from what I can easily tell
This prestigous woman is stronger than might,
has a heart of gold,
and joy that runneth over.
She does not complain over something small
she has arms open wide to help all
I know from this woman:
do not show shame, show your all
through her poetry she is so open wide
she'll not shame to tell you what her life means.
You are far from naught
you are far from hate
but there is something you have taught
and this is not only to myself
but I think I can speak for everyone here in the forum:
You are an admirable woman, and through your poetry, I wish, at times, I could reach to you and hug you.  
Since I cannot,
I guess my poetry will have to do.

© Copyright 2001 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
Cutie Putootie
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1 posted 2001-01-16 10:25 PM


Blondie (gumby)

Wonderful piece of free verse!
I 100% agree with you, Elizabeth's poetry is a work of art, and many of times I could feel what she feels...

great dedication to a wonderful writer

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-01-17 01:24 AM


your poetry will do just fine..
sincere and sweet gesture.
Yes Lizzie has been an example of grace for us all...
thank you for sharing your experience and allowing us to reflect on her talent and spirit of heart as well
take care
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2001-01-17 03:04 AM


The greatest gift to a poet is the gift of poetry and I know she will treasure it and be deeply honored by your gesture.  You are so right when you say everyone in the forum would agree and you don't need much contact with her to figure that one out. Wonderfully penned.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2001-01-17 08:03 AM


Blondie, I'm so glad I discovered this lovely tribute this morning. You have pulled some heartstrings, here. Thank you so much for thinking enough to write this beautiful poem. I am so grateful to you, my dear.
A big hug
Liz

Blondie
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5 posted 2001-01-17 08:10 AM


JM~
She is full of grace and I am so glad that I am able to read her poetry.  

Mark~
thank you so much for your post!

Liz~
You are a wonderful woman and deserve this tribute...it might not be much but I felt it was needed.  I have been gone these past months because my mother has gotten very sick, and when I returned I new I could count on good ole' Liz to have poetry there waiting for me to read.  Wonderful Poetry at that!  You can pull at my heart strings with a simple poem,  thank you so much and God Bless...
Blondie (Melissa)

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6 posted 2001-01-17 08:17 AM


wonderful tribute my friend, just the way how I see Liz too. ....excellent penned with warmth.

hope that your mom is doing better.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Blondie
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7 posted 2001-01-17 08:23 AM


Charism~
thank you so much for your post, my mother is still not doing well...she is hanging in there.
Thank you for your concern

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8 posted 2001-01-18 03:18 PM


It's so good to have you back... you've been missed!!!   I'm sorry your mother isn't better... you'll both be in my thoughts.

You've chosen such a lovely lady to pay tribute to... her immense talent is exceeded only by her grace and compassion. *S*

Blondie
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9 posted 2001-01-18 09:07 PM


Suthern~

Thanks and I am so glad to be back also.

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