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Frankie
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0 posted 2001-01-16 02:23 PM


We were supposed to be together, forever I thought,
But the lies and miscommunication tore us apart.

Now I sit here missing you, wishing you were here,
You are the one to my heart I hold dear.

Good luck in your ventures, always stay true,
I hope you remain safe, and remember,

I'll always Love You.

Frankie


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SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-16 02:29 PM


So so touching........goes right to the heart.......beautifully said   -SEA
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-01-16 02:32 PM


Nicely written, Frankie!

Nathan

Enola
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3 posted 2001-01-16 04:31 PM


That's lovely, it's good that you're not bitter.   

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look

Frankie
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4 posted 2001-01-16 05:25 PM


SEA - Thank you....just what I feel.

Nate - Thanks for reading.

Enola - I am bitter at what life has dealt me but what good does it do to show it?  Only makes everything worse....besides, there is always hope in everything.

Thanks All

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-01-17 01:53 PM


"and remember I'll always love you."
When we find someone we care for and appreciate the feelings linger on even when the relationships seems to be over...in my experience...a touching poem..James

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2001-01-17 02:20 PM


Frankie...you are right...showing bitternes doesnt help anything...and theres always a corner waiting to be turned...and who knows what may be around it...a new true love a good friend an adventure just waiting to be played...write me if you want...
Frankie
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7 posted 2001-01-19 02:45 PM


James - these feelings will never go away....Thanks you for reading.

Paula - Thank you...and you are right, there is always something new just around the corner.....the questio is...."Is this what I want?"

Frankie

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-01-24 05:20 AM


I still have a special one in my heart that is taking a long time to go away...I am amazed because I knew her for a relatively short period of time and she is still much in my thoughts...perhaps because she left me and I felt alone and rejected...but now I have a new one that desires me very much so how can I feel alone and rejected...James
Frankie
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9 posted 2001-01-24 08:23 AM


James - You are right, the feelings seem to linger when we are not the ones to say the goodbye.  Good luck with you new one.

Frankie

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