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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
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0 posted 2001-02-08 01:16 AM



Someone...
Virginia Salter


someone stole the darkness
filled its corner
with a great orange ball
that shone a whiteness reaching
far into the heavens
gleaming the midnight blue
into a soft, soft gray
placing a golden edge
on all within its path
gilding even flesh
along with mineral
vegetable
and flowing liquid gas

kissing the hour
with a new and precious day

© August 9,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Agust P
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1 posted 2001-02-08 06:55 AM


very nice painting, I liked it! AP
VAS
Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-02-08 09:48 AM


Thanks Agust P, a meagre representation of the True Artist's morning work.  Glad you liked.
Celeste
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3 posted 2001-02-08 10:01 AM


Oh Virginia........nobody can paint a picture like you can!   I loved it!

To capture and live a moment is truly living


VAS
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4 posted 2001-02-08 10:45 AM


Thanky, dreamkeeper!  You're so sweet!
Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-02-08 12:43 PM


Beautiful vision.  Nicely done.

Poeminister

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6 posted 2001-02-08 01:03 PM


ah. . . I really liked this one VAS. . . it's wonderful. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana
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7 posted 2001-02-09 11:15 AM


enjoy the read
Elizabeth
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8 posted 2001-02-09 02:26 PM


This is beautiful!
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