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Mario
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 21
Ireland

0 posted 2001-01-16 11:52 AM

(Dedicated to Bee)

ROSSCARBERY

Together, clasped, we stood
on the gentle headland.
In sweet still silence
Oasis of warmth
South-sheltered sanctuary
From the bittered wind.
Watched our angels
spill pure white-light
Scattered playfully
from a windowed heaven
To bright-sparkled ocean
Love dazzled-dancing.
Cherished sweetheart
our precious time.
Sweet serenity smiling
Flashed sunshine to you
In goodness, golden.
Warmed breath of you
shaped calm with words
Filled soft beauty
To full-smiling sails.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-01-16 11:58 AM

Very nice, enjoyed reading it, you are a fine poet, squire, I would be most honered, if you'd accompany on this dance *music starts* . Fantastic from start to end, and your dancing ain't bad either .
Thanks a lot, your poetries an inspiration .
L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-16 11:59 AM

Oh.....this is truly beautiful!
With your words, you've painted a picture of love shared in a warm place overlooking the ocean and a sky full of diamonds!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Mario
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 21
Ireland

3 posted 2001-01-16 08:43 PM

Thanks guys

I really appreciate you reading this !

LOL

Mario.

[This message has been edited by Mario (edited 01-16-2001).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-01-16 09:00 PM

Lovely, Mario.

Maree

Bee
Junior Member

since 2000-11-23

Posts 23
Ireland

5 posted 2001-01-25 09:18 PM

You took me
by the hand
onto cliff's top
passionate sea
gagnets, master of arts
flying away with our sorrow
fearless,elegant, unique
So graceful in their optimism...

Mario
Junior Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 21
Ireland

6 posted 2001-01-31 01:38 PM

Wheeling high,
high-flying gannets
soar in chilled silence
Etched lonely by calls
echoed into the emptiness
Dampened into darkness.
But yet
bearing a promise
Secretly knowing
Beautifully
forging their path
pointed by the wisdom
of a thirsty thousand years.
Guided by orange embers
fanned into white
into a fire of life,
by a love
that will not die.

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