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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-03-20 01:27 AM





obscured by white mist
your face across the ocean
in rose brushed twilight
recalling the way we were
remembering your kisses

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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Mysteria
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1 posted 2001-03-20 01:56 AM


Lordy be Lady, but that said a lot in a few lines! You are the master of these that is for sure. And a skookum graphic accompanied your lovely poem too, such a bonus. Kudos.
KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii
2 posted 2001-03-20 02:12 AM


Smiles at Mysteria.
I tried to write with the picture, LOL, as I observed you do. You started this picture/poem quest..hehehehe I wish i could write one as wonderfull as yours was.
Thanks for your comment. There was somebody in mind when I wrote it. But mainly I liked the picture I found while scouting graphics. So Hawaii looking!
Hugs,

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-03-20 04:47 AM


A lovely creation Koko...James likes.
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2001-03-20 08:28 PM


this is just lovely, and you did write the picture....very nice... be well...


Greeneyes~ love the quote btw....


****

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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