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Sharply Inhaling Doubt
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Sharply Inhaling Doubt |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Bring back the winter wind, To whisper across a crowded mind. Roaming nightly are hurts, Undecided meandering pain, Burning slowly, Melting, Layer by layer, Skins of thought turned to ash. We all know, If love was true, Then there wouldn't be disctactions. Would there? Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a nicely, written abstract poem you've written here Temptress.....well done! Nathan |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nate Dogg: Thank you very much. I've noticed you have been reading, and I am honored.  Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
There is always a tinge of doubt, isn't there? Temptress, this is great reading!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Doubt is what destroys us in the end, I think...but it is indeed almost always there. A powerful write here, you've captured my mood in many ways with this. Glad to see you posting, keep up the great work!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
who knows?? the question of the hour. . . wonderful from you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sunny1: Thank you, and yes there is. Alwye: Is it really the doubt or the realization that the doubts are founded upon something solid and valid? Thanks for reading! Sven: I certainly don't know, and it has to the question of many of my hours lately. Thank you. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very thoughtful and honest piece here, Jenn. Kathleen |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Very nice and I am glad I read this. Hugs, ME |
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