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Crazy Little Thing Called Love (Haikus & Senryus)
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Crazy Little Thing Called Love (Haikus & Senryus) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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 ~Butterfly Love Haiku~   Butterfly ballet wings flutter with destiny kaleidoscope love  ~Love Is Blind Senryu~ Love captures the heart soul now lost in reverie eyes open, yet blind ~Love's Kiss Senryu~ Two lovers embrace true love's passion in a kiss a taste of heaven ~Eyes Of Your Heart Senryu~ See not with your eyes but look at me with your heart feel that I love you ~Rain Dream Haiku~ Soft rain serenades filling my soul with rapture as I dream of you ~Beautiful Kiss Senryu~ Sensual beauty love's splendor in a soft kiss two souls left breathless ~Moonlight Serenade Haiku~ Moonlight is dancing upon lover's silhouettes love song from heaven ~Wedding Moment Senryu~  Two hearts joined as one wedding vows sealed with a kiss one perfect moment ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~  [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a lovely collection of haiku/senryu. I can't even begin to pick a favorite out of all these exquisitely beautiful thoughts. Into the library for you.  To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look who's having fun senryus, haikus, in one leaving us undone {~,^} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Melis these are wonderful... so very well done and presented. you have such lovely images here A very cool collection.. and ya know Im loving that butterfly one  later sweet syllable gator *L* We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
My favorite tho it was hard to choose You did these so very well. WONDERFUL PRESENTATION TOO! Moonlight is dancing upon lover's silhouettes love song from heaven Passion,imagination |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh beautiful, Melissa! I loved these. A taste of heaven, indeed! "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
These are all precious! If I had to pick just one, it would be: "See not with your eyes but look at me with your heart feel that I love you" ...it has such a ring of truth and beauty to it! Jellybean King |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You just KNOW I'm smiling at your growth in penning these little beauties. LOOK at you !  I love this joyful side of your writing. COOL midi to match !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, these were beautiful and enjoyable. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know Melissa. . . no one does haiku and senryu like you. . . these are wonderful. . . done with your usual superb ability. . . excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, these are clever and cute with a great layout and upbeat music too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Well you just rained haiku & senryu and they are all lovely. *L |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you very much everyone, it was fun to create this post Take care, Melissa~ |
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