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Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind

0 posted 2001-03-14 05:08 PM



Falling into a pool of dreams
nothing is what it seems....

Flying upon the perfumed breeze
caught up in a net of autumn leaves
Looking down on the world so small
leaving feeling like a giant tall

Then to float softly to the ground
Surronded by flowers all around
Then upon a bed of soft petals
The flowers containg no neddles

Swimming in the suns light
feeling as high as a small child's kite
running over an endless plain
nothing to lose everything to gain

While basking in a light showering rain
i felt my heart being rinsed of all pain
roused by the coo of an hopeful dove
under a rainbow of never ending love

Now tell me do you believe
that imagination is the key?



~*Peachy Be*~

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer K.G. - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-03-14 05:32 PM


"While basking in a light showering rain
i felt my heart being rinsed of all pain"

great lines.... and yes, it is the key

DreamLess
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since 2001-02-28
Posts 92

2 posted 2001-03-14 05:33 PM


I really liked it

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
3 posted 2001-03-14 05:36 PM


No arguments from me on that point.

Well done.

AT

" I can lie to my mirror only so long as it chooses to listen to me, and look me in the eye."

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2001-03-15 10:15 PM


Hi Voiceless,

Yes I do and I travel on my imagination on a daily basis, I love this,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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