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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-01-15 03:56 PM


Hello Mr. Yesterday
Tomorrows coming soon
You need to put the past away
Stop sifting through the runes
Let the ash fall in between
Your fingers clenched so tight
You cannot change the things you’ve seen
You cannot make them right

Hello Mr. Yesterday
It’s all behind you now
You do not have to live that way
And I can show you how
Open up your eyes and see
The world isn’t so gray
Its whatever you want to be
Tomorrow starts today

© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-15 04:07 PM


I'm printing this one, m'friend...

needed to read this today...great message!

Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-01-15 04:09 PM


Kevin--Wonderful write.  And love the last line.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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Master
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3 posted 2001-01-15 04:26 PM


Enjoyed as always! Keep writing!
Victoria
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4 posted 2001-01-15 04:30 PM


loved it kevin..always nice when you drop my passions..take care hon

                 ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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5 posted 2001-01-15 04:42 PM


Kevin~
Absolutely a wonderfully written piece.

'Tomorrow starts today'

Indeed, indeed !
~*Marge*~



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Kevin
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6 posted 2001-01-16 02:33 AM


glad to be on your paper seren

pminister and marge  
tommorow does start today  

victoria, i love having a place to drop into with people like you to share with

master   you know im your biggest fan, what up kid

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-01-16 03:30 AM


Like this Kevin...James
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8 posted 2001-01-16 03:37 AM


*the diamond in the rough*
a very shining piece. it's nice to see a ray of light.
i dig it. all the way.

You don't hear much about guys who take their shot and miss...

tracie66
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9 posted 2001-01-16 04:19 AM


Kevin~
Way ta go   so true my friend...great write
~HUG~
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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