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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-12 08:49 PM



Un rayo de luna,
despierta en mi,
el deseo de tenerte.
El tibio va y ven,
de la brisa, me huele a ti.
En un instante,
te tengo.
Y luego desapareces de mi vida,
como un rayo de luna.
Te esperare ansiosa,
hasta la proxima luna,
cuando vuelvas a mi.



A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-03-12 10:53 PM


walker,

May luna's soft glow bring your love back to your heart my friend. Beautiful writing.

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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