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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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Garland, Tx

0 posted 2001-01-15 11:48 AM


Through life’s eternity
By Richard Maxfield
1-15-2001


Like a picture
Etched into my brain
Your words burn
Into my heart

Every breath exhaled
Whispers your name
Echoing through space
Back into my soul

I gaze into waters still
Reflections I see
Of your eyes
Loving me

Some where between
Dreams and realty
You were born
Into my heart

Beauty that is you
Touches my very being
Setting my love a blaze
For your kiss

Come my dear
Dance the lover’s dance
Taking flight
Through life’s eternity



© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2001-01-15 11:50 AM


Lovely, very romantic.  Beautifully written.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
2 posted 2001-01-15 12:07 PM


thank you my friend for your comment.
Love and light,
Richard

Lady Lightning
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
3 posted 2001-01-16 12:03 PM


Well, whatcha' doing laying way back here in the back, Rich?  Get lost in all the shuffle..  
Things are moving here really quickly, huh?
Well, back out you go, this needs to be read..  
BTW..I liked this, and you know'...  
Hugs.. ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Pixydust
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since 2001-01-14
Posts 36

4 posted 2001-01-16 12:30 PM


Once again...I'm impressed. I loved it. Your words flow so gently onto the paper with perfect expression. Great write!

Pixydust  

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
5 posted 2001-01-17 02:33 PM


Thank you my friends for your comments.
Love and Light,
Richard

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