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The Trip |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The trip I remember long ago In an Islands gallivant A swimming amoretto Sporting birthday suit no pants. Snorkeling a gorgeous reef Surrounding plants legatee. Watching exotic motif Small butterflies of the sea Fantasies in natural view Alien to life on shore Just boggling the mind in hue A paradise held in store. For a moment I was free Back within life’s birthing sack Circling in infinity Alive, within its feedback. Looking into Eden’s cay Which was, once upon a day? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"For a moment I was free Back within life’s birthing sack Circling in infinity Alive, within its feedback." You have a wonderful talent Seymour ... beautiful flow, and such excellent imagery. I really enjoyed this piece!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I have always longed to do that, if only just once. Your poem brings that longing to mind. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Snorkeling a gorgeous reef Surrounding plants legatee. Watching exotic motif Small butterflies of the sea Fantasies in natural view Alien to life on shore Just boggling the mind in hue A paradise held in store. For a moment I was free Back within life’s birthing sack Circling in infinity Alive, within its feedback. Looking into Eden’s cay Which was, once upon a day? =================== once again I will thank you for painting these images in my mind ... for I can live vicariously thru your words and reflections--of all the things I've never seen. very cool write Sweet-Sy  meWe're living in a world full of illusion Everything is so unreal My mind is in a state of confusion But I can't deny the way I feel ~Depeche Mode~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, I really enjoyed your comment, thank you. Just a Women, Someday you will and I know you will really enjoy it, thank you for the response. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You must have crossed when I answered the others. Randy and I would love to show you the exotic sea, just Randy you and me. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow Sy, sounds like you had a fun trip...I loved the imagery, it was brilliant....I loved your wordplay, it was exquisite as always......a very good write! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nate, Nice of you to drop by and thank you for the wonderful comment. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The liquid feel of this was only enhanced by the jewels of color....thank you for this! |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This describes so well what it must be like to snorkel on a reef. Something I've always wanted to do. Thanks, Betty Lou Hebert |
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