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Open Poetry #12

Flirtatious {Haiku}

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-03-09 04:29 AM

Slow wet spring weather
fragile and fickle snowstorm
warm kiss cold shoulder

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-03-09 10:25 AM

Enjoyed the poem and the photo. I don't understand the title, however. Help me.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-09 10:35 AM

Ooh, a Haiku. Anyone who knows me will tell you this is my favourite format.

I understood the title... I think. It was a personification of the snowstorm, "fickle and fragile," also "warm kiss, cold shoulder."
Yeah, that snowstorm is such a tease.

A very nice job on the haiku.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-03-09 12:47 PM

Delightful!

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-03-09 01:08 PM

'Beautiful..' I love the graphic too!
Smiles to you... Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

5 posted 2001-03-09 02:08 PM

Thanks to all for your time to comment.
Yes Flirtatious was meant to mean that spring teases us with a hint of warmth and then gives us the cold shoulder.
Just My Scottish sense of humor in my haiku LOL

May Spring warm your soul and kiss you with sunshine~~~
Allen, I will search to see if you have posted haiku too.I love to do these and tanka and choka as well.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

windwarrior_RJ
Junior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 28
California

6 posted 2001-03-11 01:31 AM

Hmmm your witty inventions. I have missed these. Were you on the Big Island in snow?
I hope you didn't make a visit here and sneak past me somehow.
Beautiful words,lovely lady.
RJ

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-02-23 12:14 PM

Enjoyed...James

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