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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Everything I write is drivel. Everything I hear is too. Everything is just the same again again again refrain... Inhale, Exhale, even breathing, stifles me with boredom seething a foot's desire to kick down walls same old song-- the same dancehall. what-o-what is there to do when every day is tarnished blue? and everything I've seen before-- a feast of turkey... (who wants more?) Save me from this dusty shelf. If this is Heaven? Then give me Hell. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Been there ... I'll take Heaven Nice poem ... but then, I like your drivel  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
since youre "bored" with your "driveling" muse ... send her lil gifted poetic behind my way... I'll keep that pen of rhyme divine too busy to be bored  *sigh* ... me moody muse got bored with me ... so I am relating to this... me sweet sen's got the blues huh? well then me twin... me thinks we need a slumber party... ON THE BEACH !! yayaya ... (they deliver pizza to the beach, right) smile baby...it JUST HAS TO GET BETTER!!! Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
every day's the same ol' crap wish that i could take a nap dreams have been so much more fun come along on this one hon let's a place that's crazy be and hang those blues up a tree mud bug [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 03-08-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its time to shake things up then girl... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
HEY! wow girl, it's as though ya looked down deep inside me with this one. Loved every line, this is how I am feeling, this is me right now Wow. into my library it goes hugs Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-08-2001).] |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Hey now you go writing things like that and I WILL give you HELL in QUATRAINS COUPLETS SONNETS and the occassional venemous RONDEL for Good measure. I will state something of what you speak. You take care. AT "Learning to listen, learning to see. Learning is Power, making me free. Free to believe again, in my Human side...Be a Good Day." Jon Anderson |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Dwell upon it too long, it becomes less exciting, Too much of heaven makes hell more inviting. Stand thy ground against it! For a fatal attraction it is!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I would like to thank everyone for listening or reading to me rant---but AT? I've no idea why boredom with my own life would anger YOU--but if it does..we can write sonnets, whatever you like...I just need a common ground of understanding. I am truly perplexed here. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
No No NOT Angry was just saying, if you really want Hell, I will cast it up in verse that (I am told will make your skin crawl) I write a good bit about the poles of Heaven and Hell, the latter unfortunatelt being rather my speciality if late. Egad, I recently awoke to a dream. Better leave that off for now. But if you want Description/Exposition, Hades, I am the guy. Sorry I have been working on a book called "The Plains of Heaven, the Sewers of Hell" for about 3 years. And a couple lifetimes. No anger, just offerring services. AT "Beginning is one place, I've been before." J. Anderson |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you lovie...not paranoid...I do have this inherent gift of pissing people off...sigh. Thank you. will rest easier now. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, go on and piss them off, you know sometimes you feel you just have to vent and when you do you go on. Don't you get tired of watching every thing you say (kidding a bit here) I mean being graceful and reserved for all of your life is draining and besides, most say what THEY want anyway!!!!! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we all feel this way, occasionally huggss ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wanted to thank you all properly...but? funny, it's not much better t'nite...sigh. Strange how feeling TOO ALIVE can make you wish for a coma...at least in a coma? One expects to be alone. Love and thanks to all. *and I'm FINE...nothing that a good night's sleep--oh too late...a few hours of morning sleep...won't cure...  *HUGS, FORUM. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Can't give ya hell Celeste because you're a little touch of heaven...especially when your spirit gets disturbed a little bit...then, you write with this kind of passion, the open firey hot honest kind of writing.....and to me that's a little bit of heaven....carry on dear poet lady!. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
are you sure that you really want Hell?? Cause let me tell you. . . I've been there. . .and it's not all it's cracked up to be. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
they say the only difference between a rut and a grave are the dimensions....you having a rutty day, serenity??? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ethome...want to thank you again for your kindness...you are sweet as candy, my friend! Sven??? not only was I aware that you had been to hell? I thought you were the tour guide! and? wasn't exactly a wish...was intended as sarcasm...thank you much.deer? Thank you for that thought---it's a keeper! and? This must be a rut--it certainly is SHALLOW! thank you very much...gonna quote ya on that line too!thanks all, for putting up with still yet another tirade of mine! |
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